22 October, 2006

This is another image for my childrens book portfolio. I am still going to touch some stuff up but this is the general idea haha...im putting it away for a while. process and junk is on my blog... www.lisafields.blogspot.com


Blogger Caleb Prochnow said...

I love the painting but there is a couple of things wrong with the girls head. The girls ear looks a little large and a little high, she's also missing some volume on the lower back of her head-I think you'll notice this if you draw her head without the hair. Sorry I missed theese in the drawing. I love the shadows from the chicken wire.

11:00 PM  
Blogger Lisa Fields said...

I agree, I kind of knew...but its funny because when I looked at the drawings it didnt bother me as much so I thought maybe I had just been looking at the painting for too long. It is good to have fresh eyes critique it, I think those things would be easy enough to fix, so thanks I will fix them, eventually... haha I should just suck it up and do it now or else it will probably never happen.

12:08 AM  
Blogger Duncan Barton said...

easy fixes to an otherwise nice piece! I wonder what she's thinking...

7:34 AM  
Blogger Edward Kinsella III said...

i can't wait to see it when its done SISTA.

12:55 AM  
Blogger Mirna said...

i think it IS done. dont't overwork it. just let it be a quiet peaceful piece.

9:39 AM  
Anonymous june said...

Please do fix the girl's head...BECAUSE THIS IS CLASSIC!!! This is one of those pic. that warm a heart and could make it to a museum (my opinion) so do what it takes to make it get there! love the ducks!

10:56 AM  

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