01 December, 2006

hey guys. i updated my blog: www.evolly.blogspot.com
this is an illustration i did for fun. i'm trying to pay more attention to design, layout, composition, color palette, and such. i realized that those are things that i find appealing. so maybe in the future you guys can give me some comments on how to get better at that?


Blogger Manuel LariƱo said...

Cool Mirna!
OK, what I would change on this is the placement of their heads, they so close to the edge... I dont it would matter if the faces were really Big, but they are really small compared to the rest of the piece so I would bring them down. There is my advice! :)

5:22 PM  
Blogger Duncan Barton said...

I like the crop on the heads, but I don't like how they're cropped by the edge of the image... perhaps if the heads were away from the edge and cropped by a swirl, pillow, or hair element instead? The rest is great

9:47 AM  
Blogger mauricio salmon said...

Mirna i like the simplicity of the color scheme you have going and the round shapes too. maybe if you showed a little bit more of the guys nose it would help with the cropping. but it doesn't really bother me.

6:19 PM  
Blogger Alekos Alexakis said...

I really like the simpicity of the piece, The crop of the girl looks fine but I ll I agree with Maricio a.k.a Malakicio abitu the guys nose. I went ot your blog and the piece you have there the guy with the dead bird is awesome it makes me really sad and the composition is nice.

7:39 PM  
Blogger Emily Gross said...

I really, really like this one...a lot. I would buy it.

12:31 AM  

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